Eevee Running away from home (remake)

I have been trying to improve my skills, just like any other artist would. I have to say that I have been getting a lot better! Just imagine, this used to looked like a stupid drawing made in Illustrator! Here is what it looks like now!

What the picture used to look like: 

I want to get even better than this, so tell me what to work on next. I have taken my "Trash" into consideration, since no place looks perfect.

This took days and hours to make! If you never joined the streams.




It looks like Eevee is running away from Umbreon since She clawed his arm trying to prove a point when he said "You're weak". I wonder what will happen to Eevee next? (I do know what happens next since this is a scene from Episode 0 of the "EeveE" comic.)

A quick summary of EP.0: The eevee family has a meeting and Umbreon says Eevee is weak. Eevee then scratches him to prove a point, but he gets mad. Eevee then runs from home to get away from Umbreon, Espeon following behind trying to get Umbreon to stop. Eevee finds a stone, but starts running again. Eevee reaches a steep hill, but Umbreon accidently pushes her off. Eevee eats the stone accidentally and now can't evolve. Umbreon and Espeon goes to the bottom to check on Eevee, but she instead gets taken by Professor Oak. Eevee escapes and the family tries to find her. Eevee falls of a cliff. The family finds where Eevee fell and goes down safely to find out it's the area of the Forbidden (Fanmade) eeveelutions. Eevee is alright, but is weak. Team Rocket comes again, but the Forbidden eeveelutions fights them off. The eevee family soon takes Eevee home, and the Forbidden eeveelutions comes as well.